First Date.~Awarded by Bill~
There were no nervous butterflies spreading delicate safety-orange wings inside my gutsbecause we had been together for years,made love in every spectrum of light.And there weren't any secrets or...
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Awww this is awesome!!!!!!!! I shall return to this later..
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Thank you Pearlescence, let me know what you think when you come back to it. Glad you think it's awesome, though!
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Mmmmmm....this is *sigh*.....sooo right there where you need it! Thank you....and, btw, it IS a pleasure to read you!
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Sigh PWBthis is simply beautiful and refreshingThis a keeper.
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TR... Thank you. It is a pleasure to be read, and I thank you for taking the time to do so. I'm glad you liked it! Cuss-coose-cozy-coo... Thank you! It seems I've won you over as a consistent...
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and our laughter fell like mercury orbs liquefying the ground around usmaking it easy to slipand fall in love. ~ dear Paul, I have fast become a fan of your poetrythis is such a wonderful piece of...
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How strange to speak of falling in love when inactual fact it is an uplifting experience
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well that hits the sighhhh place your not really sure is there till a piece like this comes along to remind you..I just love this one, the flow and feel..besides it made me smile!
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Thank you Sash, Poet, and Tired. You encourage me to keeeep on writin' I'm glad it sat well, tired.
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Beautiful expression indeed...love your last lines, ~Beth
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Your use of metaphor is delightful and brought a smile. Although I'm ancient now, I still remember and wish it were yet again.An excellent read to take me to a "time out" place for today.bill
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